Morrad

Great work on the hair, as usual! Her eyes are so intense and draw me in a lot. She looks so alive and almost kind of sad...

I like your fusion of realistic/cartoon style. It works very well indeed!

Some suggestions:
Her face looks a bit stiff, especially around the jaw area. There should be more shading there (think of a cylinder or a cone, with the reflections), because right now, it looks like the top part of her face is adequately shaded, whereas the jaw and the chin look unfinished/two-dimensional.

The hair is very detailed and nicely done, but I think there should be more shading on the sides and the highlights should be a little more obvious. Right now, the hair looks rather flat despite the details and it looks like it's only coming from the front of her head, rather than from the sides and you know, all around her head. You can fix this by shading more on the sides and on the top and making highlights more obvious around the middle of the head (where the head "sticks out" the most).

Her braid also looks like it's not part of her hair, because it's a little removed from the hair. Also, the texture of the braid makes it look almost like plastic. Adding a couple more stray strands and making the existing strands more obvious would work!